Some people think personal car is the best way to travel within cities, while others think bicycles are better.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There are many options for people to travel within cities. some say that private cars are a wiser choice to travel while others argue that bicycles are more beneficial to people. Although traveling on a bicycle improves the general health of city residents, this essay believes that personal cars offer the most convenient traveling way.
On the one hand, citizens’ health significantly benefits from riding a bike because people are, in fact, doing exercise while traveling. this is to say that, when using a bike, people burn up calories, thus, reduce the amount of fat in their body. this results in better blood flow and a stronger cardiac system. For example, studies show that cyclists in Ho Chi Minh city have lower blood pressure and they are less likely to encounter heart diseases compared to car drivers. However, this essay believes that traveling by bicycles will not be enjoyable in some weather conditions.
On the other hand, saying that personal cars are the best way to travel is justifiable because they are more convenient for people. this is because modern cars have many features, such as radio players and air conditioning system, to bring absolute relaxation to drivers and people do not have to be afraid of bad weathers when sitting in a car. For instance, Chevrolet integrates all car models with a massage function in the driving seat as well as a cruise control system to stabilize steering in wet conditions so owners can have the best driving experience. this essay believes that people can definitely enjoy themselves while traveling by cars regardless of any weather.
In conclusion, despite the fact that bicycles vastly enhance people’s health conditions, personal cars offer the ultimate convenience to drivers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21951219512 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65640083907 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588850174216 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9213374236 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.230769231 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252167660521 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101682609936 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646781135652 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168656179336 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793871601869 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.