More and more people are working from home rather than at a workplace. Some people say this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but other think it will bring stress to the home. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
An increasing number of people are choosing to work from home in recent years. While some people insist this trend is beneficial for the employees and their families, others argue that it causes unnecessary tension at home. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and explain my support for the latter view.
On the one hand, those who advocate that working from home is useful for the workers and families feel that it gives them the flexibility to work as per their convenience. This is because when they are not going to the job they need not follow the usual office hours. As a result, they choose to work at a time when their productivity is the highest. Furthermore, by not going to office, they save travelling time which can be utilized to work on their assignments and finish them early so that they can spend more time with their family members.
On the other hand, for many reasons, I believe that this option leads to more tension in the family life. Firstly, there is no limit to how long one should sit and work at home. This absence of rules at home usually leads to people working longer than normal routine, which is one of the prime reasons for domestic fights. Secondly, people miss important informal communication that happens over tea in the office. For example, they may not get to hear about new vacancies that have arisen in the workplace. This can result in frustration and they might take this out on their family members.
To conclude, although working from home provides one with the convenience of working at any time and the opportunity to spend more time with family I believe it can lead to tense situations at home because of lack of set rules and the chance to socialize with co-workers.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66019417476 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39788136606 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53074433657 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6592879125 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.857142857 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323066198728 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112460274834 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584660038099 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205959986706 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605004602931 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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