Nowadays as a part of the education process students are working for a company for a short period of time without pay. Are there more advantages or disadvantages to this? Give your own opinion
In this concurrent world, there is an undeniable fact that the rate of unemployment is burgeoning across the globe. Thus, universities have included a free internship in the curriculum. In my opinion, the advantages fairly outweigh the disadvantages. In this essay, I will discuss both side of views.
Adequate evidences are obtainable to substantiate the concept of industrial experience in college time. The top-notch concrete reason is gaining industrial exposers. Employers, nowadays, is looking for experienced candidates for a specific position. Additionally, another rationale which hauls me to patron is practical knowledge. This is why, some higher education subjects need practice to get more understandable. For example, automobile subjects, such as engines and brakes, need the real-world practice to gain knowledge.
On the other hand, an unpaid internship also has a downside. To begin with, every year employers get bunch of students who can work for them at free of cost. Therefore, it will become hindrance for regular full-time workers. Furthermore, an unpaid working hour could be burdensome for lower class students. This is why, these extra hours they can utilize to mitigate their family’s financial problem.
Having discussed the pros and cons, I would like to infer that working for free, as a part of study, for employer will be beneficial for individual. If student progress will surge in that the short period of span, then there is more chance to hire in the future. For instance, there are number of evidences that, the most of people hired at the same place where they completed their internship.
In conclusion, real-time excelling knowledge in industries helps students in the future job market. Despite, having a stressful unpaid hour in industries, it is worth spending time in the company.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 380, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'practice getting'.
Suggestion: practice getting
...hy, some higher education subjects need practice to get more understandable. For example, autom...
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Line 4, column 318, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...there are number of evidences that, the most of people hired at the same place where they comp...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orth spending time in the company.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38541666667 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98122783852 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652777777778 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7755423755 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.55 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277028518555 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681238115938 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545812442366 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132062288674 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563886385265 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.39 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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