More and more people have to compete with young people for the same jobs.
What problems does this cause? what are the possible solutions?
The young people are increasingly becoming competitive these days for the olds. there a lot of seniors report that their job place are getting competitive due to the youngsters show more potency. this essay will discuss the major problems it causes in the society and the possible solution to overcome it.
The young minds are evolving and the lifestyle is forcing them to be highly challenging to succeed in their career. this develops a set back in the working environment that involves seniors and friction between the groups. though seniors skill wise posses the experience, the companies assess the work flow process in terms of speed and capability. this will wipe out the jobs of people in their mid 40s.Which in turn will result in huge impact in a country's economy as it is more likely that seniors contribute more in the purchase power of properties.
There should be a government body to regulate fair work policy that could generate system where both the parties are evaluated in terms of task completion rather than picky on timely benefits. employers should consider the physical attributes of the person less and their ethics and responsiveness to the job. it is evident in the developed countries such as Australia and China the fair work body help to minimise the friction and deliver its citizens more equal opportunity.
This essay has outlined the major problems associated with competiveness of young people and the solution to it. Therefore, it is possible to reduce this effect in the society which is creating increased stress on the mid senior citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03041825095 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6579279437 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570342205323 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6404693509 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.25 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266900749912 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928242794115 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896298491611 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171498367188 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899088785579 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.