more and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vaccancies in specialist area like engineering computing and medicines.some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people rich countries are stealing from poor countries.others feel that this is only the part of natural movement of workers around the world
do you agree or disagree.
Human life is progressing by leaps and bounds. Presently,migration of skilled people from destitute countries to rich countries has become the "hot potato". Alluring proficient people is thought to be a disgraceful act asserted by a sheer percentage of people. On the other hand, others have conflicting views, they considered it as a natural phenomenon. Here,I would like to accord with later view that moving from thriving nations to affluent nations is a part of getting towering success.
To begin with, migrating plays a phenomenal role to uplift the standard of living. To be specific, having exceptional features encourages people to achieve more and more. Thus, rich countries surrounds them with optimum opportunities. Eventually temptation of massive success lead them towards refined countries in a natural way.
Secondly, in this dazzling world people wants to live a luxurious life. They keep the desire of fabulous things such as ravishing houses,modern gadgets,astonishing cars and so on. Hence,down trodden countries never enrich professional people like doctors,engineers,computer experts with these amenities. Consequently, migration is the best way to fulfill the thrust of aristocratic lifestyle.
However,poor countries try to nourish their people with fundamental needs.Thence, it is moral duty of these people to serve their country with golden talent to improve its position among others. Furthermore, skilled people achieve plenty of things but they do not accumulate respect under other nation, so they have to remain in their countries and bring name and fame for them.
To conclude, we should not underestimate the role of our country under the influence of surplus facilities but getting significant promotions is the common thinking of person and the role of migration is beyond comparison.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65342960289 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41303236095 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635379061372 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.3804004178 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.875 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3125 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304327114133 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835652064167 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781511287812 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147825937685 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616491420767 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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