Some people think computer and internet are important in children study but other think students can learn effectively in schools and with teachersdiscuss both sides and give your own opinion

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...acher is the nation builder of tomorrow.They play an imperative role every students ...
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...rrow.They play an imperative role every students life for learning effectively.other fee...
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Suggestion: , Internet
...for learning effectively.other feel that,Internet have brought many changes in present ed...
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...any changes in present education system.Thus,such devices are vital for accomplishin...
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...changes in present education system.Thus,such devices are vital for accomplishing the...
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...al for accomplishing the ordinary study.In my opinion,Both aspect have own signifi...
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...lishing the ordinary study.In my opinion,Both aspect have own significant with my per...
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... points to endorse its benefit of tutor.First and foremost,The availability of mentor...
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... its benefit of tutor.First and foremost,The availability of mentor at school curric...
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...l curriculum is very useful for student.To be specific,they teach to children with...
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...s very useful for student.To be specific,they teach to children with practical method...
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...l as increase the learning capabilities.Secondly,teacher are role models for students.Fo...
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...rease the learning capabilities.Secondly,teacher are role models for students.For instan...
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...ly,teacher are role models for students.For instance,they push up to them in better...
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...re role models for students.For instance,they push up to them in better activity and ...
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... doing motivate in every field of study.Owing to that,Pupils can increase the more co...
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...te in every field of study.Owing to that,Pupils can increase the more confident and rem...
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...urpose of increasing the grades. Next,Doing encourage to children is very lucrative...
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...use they can keep focus on student study .Due to that,they can provide a faster an...
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...e they can keep focus on student study .Due to that,they can provide a faster and s...
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...keep focus on student study .Due to that,they can provide a faster and simple way to ...
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...s rather than computer and internet. Further emphasizing points of the merits of com...
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...sizing points of the merits of computer.Initially,It is indeed fact that,such device prov...
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...ints of the merits of computer.Initially,It is indeed fact that,such device provide...
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...omputer.Initially,It is indeed fact that,such device provide better knowledge to chil...
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...ter knowledge to children. To illustrate,with the maximum help of computer,students c...
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...strate,with the maximum help of computer,students can learn online method of study with t...
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... aim of getting great deal of knowledge.Therefore,we should not neglect electronic gadget...
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...etting great deal of knowledge.Therefore,we should not neglect electronic gadgets. ...
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...glect electronic gadgets. To conclude,Every garden has weeds.Such device play an im...
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.... To conclude,Every garden has weeds.Such device play an imperative role in stude...
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...lude,Every garden has weeds.Such device play an imperative role in student life.but ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, therefore, thus, well, for instance, as well as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91139240506 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.98691087797 2.80592935109 142% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620253164557 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 159.168324599 49.4020404114 322% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 233.5 106.682146367 219% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.5 20.7667163134 190% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.0 7.06120827912 227% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199005074372 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957790699726 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448990846851 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107212041863 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352348906564 0.056905535591 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.2 13.0946893788 200% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.97 50.2224549098 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.9 11.3001002004 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.59 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.97 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 33.5 9.78957915832 342% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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