More people have unhealthy diet and do not do enough exercises. What are the reasons for this? How can we encourage people to have a healthier lifestyle?
In this fast-paced life, living standard of the people has changed to great extent. Nowadays, individuals are not eating nutritional diet and also not doing any physical activity. This essay shall discuss the reasons behind this trend and several ways to control above mentioned practices.
In this era, Men and Women are working shoulder to shoulder. They are very busy to earn money and do not get time to cook food at home. Instead, they rely on fast food which is easily available. As packed foods contain oil in good amount so it causes various health issues such as obesity, cardiac diseases etctera. It has been proved that around 70% of the working population in UK do not prepare food at home and eat street food. Also, to save time and efforts, individuals use their car even to go to the nearby market instead of going on foot.
Besides that, people prefer to watch television in their leisure time rather than going outside to walk or to play games. Also, they used to snack while watching T.V. which is unfit for health. Moreover, most of the advertisements shown on television are related to new varieties of fast food available in market encouraging people to increase their intake.
There are various solutions to this issue which should be performed strictly. Firstly, teachers should teach their students about the benefits of balanced diet and steps to cook it. Not only diet, schools should organise healthy sport competitions among learners to encourage them to take part in outdoor activities. Secondly, people should start preparing their meals at home which do not take much time, for example, fruit shakes, salad, soups and list goes on. Last but not the least, people should go to office if it is at walking distance or nearby market on foot and in office, they should use stairs not lifts.
In conclusion, I would like to say that people should understand that their real wealth lies in a good health and take care of their health by having balanced diet and proper exercise. Also, government should impose restrictions on the advertisements which encourage people to have packed meals.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92200557103 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44186286846 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601671309192 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3288641543 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8947368421 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199155829078 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596729958858 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428557714648 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118652476496 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047306509275 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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