In current decade, our lifestyle is very fast and its changing as per years progress. Years ago, people wish to consume only homemade food. Nowadays, to reach workplace itself, people are facing challenges such as traffic. In this essay, I would be discussing with advantages of having ready made food and disadvantages of not consuming home made food.
Firstly, people does not have enough time to accommodate existing lifestyle of preparing home made food. In other words, with growing population, People mindset moved towards processed foods as it's available always at best prices that people can afford. With the advent of mobile apps like zomato, dine-in, People need not travel to Restaurants also. Instead, they can order the foods right from their home desk and it's delivered at low delivery cost. Another advantage is they can always concentrate on work or exercise or other leisure activities for extended hours than spending their time on cooking. Additionally, there are reviews available on crowdsourcing websites, so people need not worry on hygiene or quality of food.Hence, people blindly order their favourite packed food or restaurant lunch boxes from their office and they consume with their friends.
In contrast, people are also welcoming to new diseases that are unknown in past like colon cancer, liver cancer. Hence this poses definitely biggest disadvantage of consuming ready to eat foods. People also unknowingly consume foods heavily without taking into consideration about the side effects. With home prepared food, its cooked with care and hygiene, hence there could be no side effects. If oily item is planned in the morning, later for lunch, heavy foods are not prepared.
Additional care is taken at home in order to reduce major health issues. Infact, there are no health issues reported in homemade food. So, health issues are second disadvantage of eating ready to eat/processed foods.
On the negative side, Processed foods have artificial flavor to enrich the taste before expiration date. Also, another advantage is that they have vegetable fats that could make people obese and it would impact for their lifetime. Certainly, any food that is frozen, canned, baked, preserved poses major threats to health. Ofcourse, it has lots of preservatives, color, sodium, sweetener which are dangerous to heart and stomach. Although, preservatives are added to preserve taste, freshness and appeal, they don't serve any healthy purpose to our body. Especially, the snack foods offered in Movie theaters and malls have relatively high range of oil content, so it would be increasing fat and make us more obese or fatter.
In conclusion, I agree that disadvantages of consuming ready to eat foods outweigh the advantages. Summing up, Health issues, obesity, irregular diet practice are the results of consuming ready to eat foods. Hence, I agree not to consume ready to eat foods and prefer only homemade foods which is healthy and has no side effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, so, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2514.0 1615.20841683 156% => OK
No of words: 478.0 315.596192385 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25941422594 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61252764148 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 176.041082164 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550209205021 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 792.9 506.74238477 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5262063403 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1111111111 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7037037037 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289035171713 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825571741196 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746924575902 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161838185905 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057634145976 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 78.4519038076 175% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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