Most people in the world need to work in order to lead a decent life or even just to survive. Many workers are motivated by money: if the job pays well, they are willing to do it. However, some people are not concerned with the size of their pay packet: they simply enjoy their job and choose to do it whether they earn a high salary or not. What is more important – salary or job satisfaction? Discuss and give reasons for your answer.
Having a job to lead a decent lifestyle is quite common nowadays. While It is often seen that the money seems to be a prime factor, which attracts many employees towards a particular job, few people love to follow their passion or pursue a career, which they cherish without worrying about salary. In my opinion, though i agree that financial stability can only be maintained with a decent salary coming in regularly. However, job satisfaction also is a vital catalyst, which is mandatory to have a stress free and content life.
To begin with the importance of money, several individuals choose to work in a job, which they do not find interesting just because it offers a handsome pay. The prime reason for this inclination is the need of maintaining a decent financial status in society, which can only be achieved with the heavy bank balance. For instance, If a person chooses to follow their passion such as arts or music, he would most probably end-up struggling for the money to fulfill even his basic needs. Furthermore, having a good salary means a person can afford all luxurious things in life for him, as well as, a family such as a car and a spacious house, and also able to provide high-grade education to their kids.
On the other hand, job satisfaction is an essential catalyst, which contributes profoundly to happiness in life. When people do their favourite job, they tend to be more productive and creative at work, and sometimes it also leads to a prosperous life. For instance, many artists and painters are quite notorious and earning really well.
In conclusion, despite the fact, high-paid jobs offer financial stability and a fairly affluent lifestyle, people who prefer to pursue their passion seems to have a more fulfilling life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, really, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68548361049 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.2741016373 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.5 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.25 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270957264299 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957788967013 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651370409252 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160471118439 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429923323036 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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