Most of the world's urgent problems are caused by overpopulation. Do you agree or disagree?
Invincibly, due to the proliferation in population of living being there is a substantial surge in conundrums faced by contemporary societies nowadays. It is argued that world's pressing issue are mostly stemmed from the excessive increment in the world population. Although I admit that overpopulation is the prime cause of some problems, I also surmise there are other deteriorated concerns which are caused by multifarious factors.
On the one hand, gloomy profusion in population has led mankind to a number of difficulties. Firstly, Quality of air is degraded day by day with the flourishing population of all human beings. This can be illustrated by the fact that emission of toxic gases from vehicles and industries has increased instrumentally. Secondly, the unrelenting nature of the population on earth has led to the scarce means of fresh water in many parts of the world, especially in the sparsely populated regions. So it is generally perceived that the future generation have to live without the access of this momentous source of living which certainly shifted their lives profoundly.
However, Some of the paramount issues are caused by different factors brought by the human's inclinations. One of them is the mushrooming of mass destruction weapons such as nuclear, chemical and hydrogen weapons. Some developed nations are making this unpragmatic inventions in the name of defence, while others spared no efforts in discourage them. Experts worry if their disputes cannot resolves the,m it culminates in the world war. Another cause for concern is the climate change. Many blossoming companies tend to cut great amount of trees in order to construct new buildings and factories. This trend, afterwards would whipped into sudden destruction of the natural habitats which in turn could greatly attributable to global warning.
To recapitulate the aforementioned statements, Although it is true that some of the pressing problems are caused by overpopulation. Nevertheless, I would argue that many other problems results from a range of different reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41975308642 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11831666062 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617283950617 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1661435742 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.294117647 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0588235294 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122413731145 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380559520435 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514441152259 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857799081952 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543898809043 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.