You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there.Ask them for help finding accommodationTell them where you would like to liveTell them the type of place you are looking for

Essay topics:

You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there.

Ask them for help finding accommodation
Tell them where you would like to live
Tell them the type of place you are looking for

Dear Smith,
I hope you are in good spirit there. I am writing in regards to seek your help in finding a suitable accommodation for me as I am moving there on 2nd november of next month.

Let me explain my situation in detail. My company has given my promotion and they want me to move New-York for ease in work. Apart from you I do not know anyone there. Though, Company will provide me hotel accommodation for one month to find own room, but I think you can give me better idea of this city as you are well-versed about every part of this urban city.

I want you to find me a apartment near city centre because it will help to reach my office as it is near by it. Furthermore, I want a apartment which has separate washroom and single bedroom. I do not mind if someone is sharing kitchen and lobby with me, moreover, my monthly budget is $2000.

Would you find that one for me? I am sure you will find such apartment for me.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Regards,
Vinod Chauhan

Votes
Average: 7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 51, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
... are in good spirit there. I am writing in regards to seek your help in finding a suitable ac...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 91, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'suitable accommodation'.
Suggestion: suitable accommodation
...in regards to seek your help in finding a suitable accommodation for me as I am moving there on 2nd nove...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 23, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...is urban city. I want you to find me a apartment near city centre because it w...
^
Line 6, column 101, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...t will help to reach my office as it is near by it. Furthermore, I want a apartment whi...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 133, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s it is near by it. Furthermore, I want a apartment which has separate washroom a...
^
Line 13, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing from you. Regards, Vinod Chauhan
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, well, apart from, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 819.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28795811518 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3734665332 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61780104712 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0976570675 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.0 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6923076923 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309379383909 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128652113157 0.0766984524023 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104724308702 0.0603063233224 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205637327909 0.12726935374 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0864358321241 0.0580467560999 149% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.01 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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