Some people say that TV advertisements have benefits, while others believe the opposite. Discuss both views, give your own opinion and include examples from your experience.
Invincibly, Advertisements are one of the flourishing ways of mass communication. It is argued that TV ads are lucrative in many ways for everyone while others have spared no effort in order to discourage it. This paragraph will enunciate both views in depth and give relevant data in detail.
Irrefutably, TV commercials help individuals in saving their time to buy quality products in budget of latest technology. This is due to the fact that people find it easy and time saving to get information about various products and their quality by watching the advertisements instead of involving in comparing different products and take decisive step. Indeed, I also found short promoting videos very beneficial because it helps me to buy new mobile phone. Overall, the idea of promoting amenities and items is very profitable and pragmatic for both manufacturers and its users.
Although, Despite the benefits, there are some exacerbate issues associated with it which is a cause for concern among certain demographics of society, the first and the foremost is demand of unnecessary products by youngsters from their parents. In order to promote products, big companies hire popular sportsman and filmstars to give advise of benefits of respective product in TV advertisements which culminates desires in audience to own those products and waste their money. In addition, some adult promotions on TV also imparting unwanted knowledge to children which is not required at their age. These few reasons which are aforementioned have bolstered existing impact on the multitude of viewers that TV advertisement are not beneficial at all.
Hammering the final nail, I pen down by saying that TV advertisements has also brought number of ills in its wake, despite of its usefulness. This essay discussed why TV advertisements are beneficials. In addition, this essay also discuss drawback associated with it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32119205298 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08009856154 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602649006623 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3244279796 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.785714286 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78571428571 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17906694846 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599565228287 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338715994204 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103603040252 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345958836692 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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