In today's times internet is making it easy to study online from home. Some prefer online courses to study and they think it is better. Other prefer classroom education. Discuss both views and share your opinion.
With the advent of globalisation, Internet has become one of the most prominent source of information. Online study still choose to attend traditional classrooms. In this essay, I shall argue that online courses still have some drawbacks and why I surmise that classrooms are still preferred over online courses.
To commence with, Indulging in virtual classes is a time-saving option with many negative effects. This is because, many students who find internet classes are convenient has become lazy and less hard-working. For instance, a recent study done by Student Welfare Society shows that students are suffering from obesity and lack of experiencing competitions who are involved in virtual courses. Though internet classes are gaining popularity in every generation, yet it still has lots of limitations in comparison with traditional classes.
On the other hand, Classroom education gives students a better opportunity for face-to-face discussion and peer competition. This is because, In traditional classrooms, individuals physically connect with others mostly of same age group and same mindset. For example, University of Cambridge recent study shows that student of old-style classrooms are more active, hardworking and ready to compete compared to online proactive students. Physical classrooms are still has its evident advantages and proved as a better options for overall successful development of a student.
Hammering the final nail, I argued that old-age learning methods are still providing better opportunities for students in their overall development instead of online courses. In future, we will see more technological changes in classrooms to make it available for each and every student.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'In the future'?
Suggestion: In the future
... development instead of online courses. In future, we will see more technological changes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, still, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71984435798 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03111092236 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591439688716 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4587910993 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.076923077 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191952420762 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687857853785 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535708599393 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121050990203 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625240615127 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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