You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager.
In your letter
explain why you want to take time off work
give details of the amount of time you need
suggest how your work could be covered while you are away
Dear Mr.Smith,
I am writing to apprise you that I need one week holiday from my chores after two months.
In november, there is a marriage of one of my sibling in banglore. This occasion is very momentous for me as we had spent our childhood together. Even we are in a same class and in same school, Indeed, he is my best friend also. He requested me to come their two days before the functions and i also want to go. As you might be aware that I am working assiduously to complete my responsibilities of the job from last year continuously even without a single leave. So I think this pragmatic occasion could help me to get rid of this fraught of stressful life and help me to maintain work life balance.
I need you to exempt me from my duties from 12th november to 18th november as this would help me to relish this marriage and unwind myself in this respite time frame as ramifications.
Though, I will certainly provide all paramount details of my work to my teammates, Nevertheless if they required any more information from my side I would be available via emails. I had to talked with them and they accede for this. All i need is your permission for this.
I hope you understand my regards for this and surely let me go.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours' truly.
Vinod Chauhan
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Smith
Dear Mr.Smith, I am writing to apprise you that I ne...
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Line 4, column 224, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...me school, Indeed, he is my best friend also. He requested me to come their two days...
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Line 4, column 313, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...re the functions and i also want to go. As you might be aware that I am working as...
^^
Line 8, column 237, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...with them and they accede for this. All i need is your permission for this. I ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, nevertheless, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 32.9175257732 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1081.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 242.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46694214876 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64039239829 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582644628099 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 331.2 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1837067782 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1538461538 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200715035163 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760378898107 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658865685588 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107903147535 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.013280673652 0.0580467560999 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.