Many people these days have computer, laptops, telephones at their home for work. Do you think, working from home has more advantages or disadvantages? Give reasons.

The spread of home working is opening up a new range of possibilities for the way businesses can work and structure themselves. Having necessary equipment for home working brings new responsibilities as well as opportunities and benefits for both employees and employers. With increasing number of employees working at home, includes both advantages and disadvantages, which I shall discuss further in this essay.

To start off, Working at home - or using home as a working base for at least part of the week - shows that there are numerous benefits for business. For instance, there would be substantial staff motivation with reduce stress and sickness levels which will help them for better work/life balance. In addition, Employers also have financial benefits by savings cost on office space and other facilities. Home working is considered helpful for both employers and employees to gain higher performance and productivity.

On the other hand, there are some considerable disadvantages associated with working at home for both the parties. For example, there would be difficulty in monitoring performance and issues related to it. Risk of Information theft is also a big issue in home working process. Additionally, there could be more communication cost and decrease staff morale for both of them. Sometimes, this menace would led a great loss for employers.

By hammering the final nail, I pen down by saying that a shift towards home working does not mean employees have to work only at home. Though, often splitting time between home and the workplace is the most productive solution.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 404, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2862745098 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99082863824 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592156862745 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6255021194 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.2857142857 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356692764623 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138365501338 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850182636526 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243880827143 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281532973089 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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