Some people say that TV advertisements have benefits, while others believe the opposite. Discuss both views, give your own opinion and include examples from your experience.
Adverstimet plays a significant role in our lives, however, if it is positive sparks much debate. this essay describes the pros and cons of advertisement.
Many people believe that advertisement could make people easier understanding a product's specification, this is mainly because the advertisement usually required describes products advantages to stand out from the mass similarities, so that customers could comparing the productions directly. Besides, TV promotions upgraded the way customers approach for a product that previously relies on friends' recommendations. By advertisements, people could know more and more products in the market that related to their lives and such a phenomenon could also stimulate the market for competitive which benefit people in the long run. Moreover, the advertisement industry could also generate more occupations for catering the increasing job hunters.
On the hand, some people assert that advertisement as a trap addicting people for impulsive procurement. A common fact could be proved this is surplus commodates purchased by household and keep it in a store til expirations. also, people concern that companies spend more cost on the advertisement may result in an insufficient investment in the product itself.
In general, I believe advertisement is necessary for promoting products and could make our lives more convenient. however, the government should also regulate the industry by censoring the advertisement to avoid false information.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, may, moreover, so, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78378378378 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35816173273 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599099099099 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6440638425 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.727272727 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108570730312 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432655835385 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404162988012 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0626839038179 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382662814382 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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