New education policy has been introduced by the government. According to this policy, children are required to remain in the school or college till the age of 18.
Discuss advantage or disadvantage of this policy.
Some countries require their children to remain at the school until the age of thirteen and others require children to continue their school education till the age of eighteen. In keeping view that children must get the education so that they are future ready to join the workforce and get enough maturity for their coming life, the government has passed a bill that keeps children in the school before they turn eighteen.
Firstly, it is believed that children can not get sufficient education before the age of eighteen. Consequently, a child is not mature enough to deal with challenges of life. Life can be challenging for children if they are not guided properly. For example, kids may not understand how to tackle problems like drug abuse. Kids are always curious and therefore they may fall prey to people like drug dealers who would only want money. Additionally, there are so many changes that occur before the age of eighteen that children may not be comfortable with like menstruation, other bodily and emotional changes. When teenagers are among their peers they learn better how to deal with such conditions.
Additionally, skill development is not possible before the age of eighteen. In fact, it takes many more years for us to learn skills that are required at work such as communication skills, computer skills, interpersonal skills, time management, leadership ability etcetera. As technology is advancing, the need for skill development is increasing and therefore a child cannot be assumed to be earning a decent living before learning such skills.
To sum up, the decision of the government that children should remain in school or college till the age of eighteen is commendable because it gives a child time to become mature enough so that he is able to deal with challenges of life and to learn skills required for a living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, may, so, therefore, for example, in fact, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00647249191 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71743315984 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495145631068 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.752333526 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13970777936 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543806115353 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712512714735 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102050204366 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067797200481 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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