New technologies and ways of buying and selling products are transforming the lives of consumers.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Modern day consumers are presently in an unprecedented era of transformation in the purchase of goods and services, particularly via the internet. As with all new technology, while there may be some disruption and ill-effects, I believe the internet is having a huge impact" class="bmt-vocab-word modal-trigger" style="text-decoration: underline; transition: all 0.75s ease 0s; color: rgb(15, 105, 140) !important; outline: 0px !important; font-weight: 600 !important;">impact onpeople’s lives.
To begin with, the internet has created a global market with far reaching effect" class="bmt-vocab-word modal-trigger" style="text-decoration: underline; transition: all 0.75s ease 0s; color: rgb(15, 105, 140) !important; outline: 0px !important; font-weight: 600 !important;">effects. An increase" class="bmt-vocab-word modal-trigger" style="text-decoration: underline; transition: all 0.75s ease 0s; color: rgb(15, 105, 140) !important; outline: 0px !important; font-weight: 600 !important;">increase in competition among retailers has resulted inlower prices on many products making finding a bargain as simple as doing a Google search. A more crowded marketplace has also resulted inan increase in benefits to shoppers by retailers eager to attract more business. Nowadays, for example, free shipping and same day deliverymean it’s easier than ever to shop without leaving the home.
A further significant impact of the internet is the rise of the savvy shopper. A plethora of online tools make it easy to find the best deal through services like price comparison apps, online product rating systems, and customer reviews. shopping may further be done anytime day or night, and for as long as a shopper wishes to spend before purchasing, thus increasing the control consumers have over how they buy.
Finally, it’s important to consider the increase in availability brought on by the internet. Everyday groceries that were once picked up locally can now be ordered online. Items such as fresh produce and dairy products are deliverable with the click of a button.
In conclusion, there is much evidence to suggest that shopping online is revolutionizing the buying process for consumers. With the rise of augmented reality and the ability to ‘see’ digital products in three dimensions, the internet’s effect is likely to become even more pronounced.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2125.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 6.23167155425 5.12529762239 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.82782388754 2.80592935109 172% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604105571848 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 100.407359068 49.4020404114 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.785714286 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3571428571 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0497988811613 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0240091301731 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0231980491619 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0385576953442 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189229856179 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.15 12.4159519038 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 9.78957915832 225% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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