New technologies and ways of buying and selling products are transforming the lives of consumers.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Shopping habits have changed drastically these days due to the advent of virtual market platforms which operated particularly by the internet. Lots of people nowadays rely on these platforms in their daily shopping. Nonetheless, it extremly hard to decide whether such a recent facility has a positive or a negative impact on the shopping habits. This essay however, aims to discuss such an intricate issue in further detail and before coming to a conclusion.
To start with, it’s irrefutable that the internet has participate conspicuously on the latest shopping behavior. Firstly, people nowadays can explore a plethora of international items which’s existed in several e-shops via the internet. For instance, Amazon and Alibaba are the most common e-shops globally. many individuals use such platforms to find, compare, and even read the reviews of other users. these features are impossible to have in the conventional shopping habits. Hence, lots of people prefer this kind of shopping as an effortless method for shopping a high quality product with reasonable prices.
On the flip side, virtual markets are not applicable for everything. First off all, various items need to be tested before purchasing such as shoes, T-shirts, and many other products. As, the customers can not be able to count on the sellers description for something very hard to describe such as a fabric or the size. Furthermore, any mistake in the requested product might be extremely inconvenient as it should be returned back through a courier and waiting until fixing this problem.
To sum up, undoubtedly, e-commerce has evolve the shopping habits for many people around the word. Nevertheless, these platforms are not 100 percent reliable and lots of errors might happen and make such an experience very bad. Therefore, I strogly believe that e-shopping might have some advantages in certain items which not need to be tested physcially.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: participated
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Suggestion:
...quality product with reasonable prices. On the flip side, virtual markets are no...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sellers'' or 'seller's'?
Suggestion: sellers'; seller's
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Suggestion: returned
... extremely inconvenient as it should be returned back through a courier and waiting until fix...
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Suggestion: evolved
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Suggestion:
...which not need to be tested physcially.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, therefore, for instance, kind of, such as, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35504885993 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86093265373 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592833876221 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0694886625 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.7058823529 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0588235294 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41176470588 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0614710112292 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0205720542748 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270719255392 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0373995921832 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199264300612 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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