New technologies and ways of buying and selling products are transforming the lives of consumers.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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New technologies and ways of buying and selling products are transforming the lives of consumers.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

There is no doubt that shopping habits have changed drastically these days due to the advent of virtual market platforms. Lots of people rely on these platforms in their daily shopping. However, the question of whether the e-commerce has positive or negative impacts on people is arguably the most perplexing matter. This essay however, aims to discuss such an intricate issue in further detail and before coming to a conclusion.

To start with, it’s irrefutable that the internet has participate conspicuously on the latest shopping behavior. Firstly, people nowadays can explore a plethora of international items which’s existed in several e-shops via the internet. For instance, Amazon and Alibaba are the most common e-shops globally. Many individuals use such platforms to find, compare, and even read the reviews of other users. These features are impossible to have in the conventional shopping habits. Hence, lots of people prefer this kind of shopping as an effortless method for shopping a high quality product with reasonable prices.

On the flip side, virtual markets are not applicable for everything. First off all, various items need to be tested before purchasing such as shoes, T-shirts, and many other products. As, the customers can not be able to count on the sellers description for something very hard to describe such as a fabric or the size. Furthermore, any mistake in the requested product might be extremely inconvenient as it should be returned back through a courier and waiting until fixing this problem.

To sum up, undoubtedly, e-commerce has evolve the shopping habits for many people around the word. Nevertheless, these platforms are not 100 percent reliable and lots of errors might happen and make such an experience very bad.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS General Training

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 1, column 280, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
...forms in their daily shopping. However, the question of whether the e-commerce has positive or negative...
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Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'participated'.
Suggestion: participated
...pos;s irrefutable that the internet has participate conspicuously on the latest shopping be...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 419, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sellers'' or 'seller's'?
Suggestion: sellers'; seller's
...stomers can not be able to count on the sellers description for something very hard to ...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 603, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returned'.
Suggestion: returned
... extremely inconvenient as it should be returned back through a courier and waiting until fix...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 224, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'evolved'.
Suggestion: evolved
...>To sum up, undoubtedly, e-commerce has evolve the shopping habits for many people aro...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, nevertheless, so, for instance, kind of, no doubt, such as, to start with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2873.0 1615.20841683 178% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 7.48177083333 5.12529762239 146% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.74999056461 2.80592935109 205% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510416666667 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 737.1 506.74238477 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 222.707687981 49.4020404114 451% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 205.214285714 106.682146367 192% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4285714286 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0223159569845 0.244688304435 9% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0149214476858 0.084324248473 18% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0271847338109 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0154331881023 0.151304729494 10% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178084128417 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.5 13.0946893788 210% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 18.69 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 11.3001002004 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 26.4 12.4159519038 213% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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