New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers. To what extent do you agree with this opinion? | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

Essay topics:

New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?

Modern day consumers are presently in an <a href="https://www.bestmytest.com/ielts/ielts-writing/67#modal-vocab-lesson-un…; class="bmt-vocab-word modal-trigger" style="text-decoration: underline; transition: all 0.75s ease 0s; color: rgb(15, 105, 140) !important; outline: 0px !important; font-weight: 600 !important;">unprecedented</a> era of transformation in the purchase of goods and services, particularly via the internet.  As with all new technology, while there may be some disruption and ill-effects, I believe the Internet is having a huge <a href="https://www.bestmytest.com/ielts/ielts-writing/67#modal-vocab-lesson-im…; class="bmt-vocab-word modal-trigger" style="text-decoration: underline; transition: all 0.75s ease 0s; color: rgb(15, 105, 140) !important; outline: 0px !important; font-weight: 600 !important;">impact</a> onpeople’s lives.<p dir="ltr" style="white-space: normal; transition: all 0.75s ease 0s; line-height: 1.5rem; margin-bottom: 0px; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: helvetica, arial, sans-serif; padding: 1em 0px; font-size: 15px; font-variant-ligatures: normal; orphans: 2; widows: 2; outline: 0px !important;">To begin with, the Internet has created a global market with far reaching <a href="https://www.bestmytest.com/ielts/ielts-writing/67#modal-vocab-lesson-ef…; class="bmt-vocab-word modal-trigger" style="text-decoration: underline; transition: all 0.75s ease 0s; color: rgb(15, 105, 140) !important; outline: 0px !important; font-weight: 600 !important;">effect</a>s.  An <a href="https://www.bestmytest.com/ielts/ielts-writing/67#modal-vocab-lesson-in…; class="bmt-vocab-word modal-trigger" style="text-decoration: underline; transition: all 0.75s ease 0s; color: rgb(15, 105, 140) !important; outline: 0px !important; font-weight: 600 !important;">increase</a> in competition among retailers has <a href="https://www.bestmytest.com/ielts/ielts-writing/67#modal-vocab-lesson-re…; class="bmt-vocab-word modal-trigger" style="text-decoration: underline; transition: all 0.75s ease 0s; color: rgb(15, 105, 140) !important; outline: 0px !important; font-weight: 600 !important;">result</a>ed inlower prices on many products making finding a bargain as simple as doing a Google search.   A more crowded marketplace has also resulted inan increase in <a href="https://www.bestmytest.com/ielts/ielts-writing/67#modal-vocab-lesson-be…; class="bmt-vocab-word modal-trigger" style="text-decoration: underline; transition: all 0.75s ease 0s; color: rgb(15, 105, 140) !important; outline: 0px !important; font-weight: 600 !important;">benefit</a>s to shoppers by retailers eager to attract more business.  Nowadays, for example, free shipping and same day deliverymean it’s easier than ever to shop without leaving the home.<p dir="ltr" style="white-space: normal; transition: all 0.75s ease 0s; line-height: 1.5rem; margin-bottom: 0px; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: helvetica, arial, sans-serif; padding: 1em 0px; font-size: 15px; font-variant-ligatures: normal; orphans: 2; widows: 2; outline: 0px !important;">A further <a href="https://www.bestmytest.com/ielts/ielts-writing/67#modal-vocab-lesson-si…; class="bmt-vocab-word modal-trigger" style="text-decoration: underline; transition: all 0.75s ease 0s; color: rgb(15, 105, 140) !important; outline: 0px !important; font-weight: 600 !important;">significant</a> impact of the Internet is the rise of the savvy shopper.  A plethora of online tools make it easy to find the best deal through services like price comparison apps, online product rating systems, and customer reviews.  Shopping may further be done anytime day or night, and for as long as a shopper wishes to spend before purchasing, thus increasing the control consumers have over how they buy.<p dir="ltr" style="white-space: normal; transition: all 0.75s ease 0s; line-height: 1.5rem; margin-bottom: 0px; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: helvetica, arial, sans-serif; padding: 1em 0px; font-size: 15px; font-variant-ligatures: normal; orphans: 2; widows: 2; outline: 0px !important;">Finally, it’s important to consider the increase in availability brought on by the Internet.  Everyday groceries that were once picked up locally can now be ordered online.  Items such as fresh produce and dairy products are deliverable with the click of a button.  <p dir="ltr" style="white-space: normal; transition: all 0.75s ease 0s; line-height: 1.5rem; margin-bottom: 0px; color: rgb(62, 62, 62); font-family: helvetica, arial, sans-serif; padding: 1em 0px; font-size: 15px; font-variant-ligatures: normal; orphans: 2; widows: 2; outline: 0px !important;">In conclusion, there is much evidence to suggest that shopping online is revolutionizing the buying process for consumers.  With the rise of augmented reality and the ability to ‘see’ digital products in three dimensions, the Internet’s effect is likely to become even more <a href="https://www.bestmytest.com/ielts/ielts-writing/67#modal-vocab-lesson-pr…; class="bmt-vocab-word modal-trigger" style="text-decoration: underline; transition: all 0.75s ease 0s; color: rgb(15, 105, 140) !important; outline: 0px !important; font-weight: 600 !important;">pronounced</a>.

Votes

Essay Categories

IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS General Training

Comments

Essay evaluations by e-grader

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
^^^
Line 1, column 1094, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &nbsp
...ternet. As with all new technology, ^^^^^^
Line 1, column 4903, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...bsp;as simple as doing a Google search. A ^^^^^
Line 1, column 5813, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...='outline: 0px !important;'>. ^^^^^
Line 1, column 7312, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...='outline: 0px !important;'>. A ^^^^^
Line 1, column 7880, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &nbsp
...le='outline: 0px !important;'>, ^^^^^^
Line 1, column 8004, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ...ant;'>online product rating systems, ^^
Line 1, column 8238, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...='outline: 0px !important;'>. Shopping may further be done anytime da...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 8357, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &nbsp
...hopper wishes to spend before purchasing, ^^^^^^
Line 1, column 9441, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
...os;outline: 0px !important;'> Everyday ^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 9884, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...'> can now be ordered online. Items such as ^^^^^
Line 1, column 10284, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...='outline: 0px !important;'>.

^^^^^
Line 1, column 10764, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ...ine: 0px !important;'>In conclusion, ^^
Line 1, column 10935, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...izing the buying process for consumers. With ^^^^^
Line 1, column 11504, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &nbsp
...le='outline: 0px !important;'>, ^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 11150.0 1615.20841683 690% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 915.0 315.596192385 290% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 12.1857923497 5.12529762239 238% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 5.49990608324 4.20363070211 131% => OK
Word Length SD: 12.302845879 2.80592935109 438% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 284.0 176.041082164 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.310382513661 0.561755894193 55% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 2489.4 506.74238477 491% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.7 1.60771543086 168% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 91.0 20.2975951904 448% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 616.252586201 49.4020404114 1247% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 1115.0 106.682146367 1045% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 91.5 20.7667163134 441% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00401408684516 0.244688304435 2% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0042773621454 0.084324248473 5% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00426413838495 0.0667982634062 6% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00401408684516 0.151304729494 3% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 81.7 13.0946893788 624% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -113.95 50.2224549098 -227% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 33.9 7.44779559118 455% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 51.8 11.3001002004 458% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 54.61 12.4159519038 440% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.57 8.58950901804 135% => OK
difficult_words: 198.0 78.4519038076 252% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 36.0 9.78957915832 368% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 38.4 10.1190380762 379% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 55.0 10.7795591182 510% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.