News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence
Media and press nowadays play the most important role in presenting the political and social agendas to the common people. In the following contemplation I will discuss what factors influence the news that is broadcasted and whether people have become used to getting negative news. I feel that more positive news should be reported.
Editors decide the content of the newspapers. Factors such as political, social, and customer rating are some of the factors that mold the news broadcasted. Since people are the customer thus the news is molded according to the likings of the general public. Political influences also play a major role in directing the content of the newspapers and social media. Political leaders often have direct contact with the editors and they use their power and influence for publishing their achievements through media reporters. For instance, Diana was the most beloved queen of Britain and as a result news related to her was always published in newspapers even at the cost of intruding her privacy.
On the contrary, people argue that often we become used to getting negative news. I agree with this viewpoint. The media reporters should not present the news under political influences so that the general public is not fooled from fake news. There are so many events like poverty, malnourishment, education, housing issues, road conditions, electricity issues in villages, and safety issue for girls that needs to be addressed. However, newspapers often only cover political agendas under the influence of leaders.
In conclusion, I reiterate the need for publishing positive news as there is already surplus amount of negative news in the newspapers. This leads to spreading of hatered based on caste, creed and color. Political figures use these differenced to collect their votes. However, the environment of the country is polluted forever.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, thus, as to, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61158955428 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506666666667 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 300.0 20.2975951904 1478% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1554.0 106.682146367 1457% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 300.0 20.7667163134 1445% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 110.0 7.06120827912 1558% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298339536365 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.298339536365 0.084324248473 354% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191683167325 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572937535908 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 153.0 13.0946893788 1168% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -241.48 50.2224549098 -481% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 121.5 11.3001002004 1075% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.24 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.2 8.58950901804 258% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 122.0 10.1190380762 1206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 122.0 10.7795591182 1132% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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