Now a days museums and historical sites are visited mainly by foreign tourists rather than locals. Why is this happening? What cab be done to get locals to visit museums and historical sites more often?
Historic places keep the history alive. These day, museums and historical places mostly wonder by overseas people. Popularity of the culture brings foreigners in the large numbers. Similarly, more attraction and less entry fee can bring an ample of locals as well.
There are several reasons which are associated with main visits of foreigners and not locals. To begin with, culture and traditions are the crucial reasons for attraction. Overseas people shows keen interest in culture diversity. Mostly visitors come to see the wonders. For example, the Tajmahal was established in Agra in 1631, since the time, visitors increased dramatically in count. Another reason of visit is to be familiar with history. Furthermore, foreigners visit museums and galleries to capture the history into cameras. Also, every person visit abroad, eagerly wants to see the places.
Everyone has their own choices and opinions as being in free world. Nearly 20% of locals visit monuments and authentic places due to devoid of interest. Moreover, living in a same place left a person with no interest. For instance, people living near to Qutub minar hardly visit the place as they lost their interest. However, an initiative can change this perspective. Massive population cab be brought by reducing ticket prices or by offering free entry. In addition, guides can play a vital role in attracting locals. Most of the history places are built with reasons but it becomes mystery for visitors as there is no source for dissemination.
In conclusion, foreign tourists are a positive development for our economy and they are highly motivated to see the places due to culture and traditions. Similarly, it is a requirement to waken up the locals with some ease.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, moreover, similarly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21985815603 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68640836432 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595744680851 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9408596254 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.9090909091 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8181818182 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191851507993 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549790002263 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538935887747 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112786826094 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443030223478 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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