More and more media attention is being paid to famous people who are successful in sports and movies. Why do you think this is happening? Is this a good thing?
It would not be unfair to say that today's world is saturated with celebrity related news and gossip. We have access to the very latest news about celebrities via different mediums. This essay shall delve with into the causes of this phenomenon. It is definitely not a good thing.
The mail reason for this is that people idolize celebs and want to know more about them. Celebs are the role models for many. People want to be like them and that is why they want to know everything about them. The media is only responding to people's desire. To survive in today's world, the media, whether it is e-media or print media, has to focus on these big shots. Another reason is that the celebs themselves need the media coverage to survive in today's cut-throat competition. That is why the extent and quality of celebrity news in the media is multiplying.
However, too much focus on the lives of celebrities is certainly harmful for the people as well as the celebs themselves. Too much focus on celebrities is diverting people's attention from more important issues such as politics and the environment. For example, the public knows about Salman khan and his broken relationships than about many political issues. Another important point is that sometimes these celebs are negative role models for people. For instance, if a celebrity drinks or smokes then young people may copy him thinking that it is glamorous to drink and smoke.
Too much celebrity gossip can be detrimental for the celebs themselves. Celebrities' lives do not have any privacy and they can not enjoy simple things of life which a normal man can does. Sometimes it leads to commit suiside or increase the level of stress in their lives and consequently, their careers also suffer.
To conclude, the media does too much focus on the lives of famous people because of several reasons. However, media has got a great power to spread awareness and it should use its power for the right cause. The should know where to draw the line.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, may, so, then, well, as to, for example, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82898550725 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47247566132 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515942028986 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.580014752 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.7272727273 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6818181818 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86363636364 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194277381573 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579717782544 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528444395964 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980939289142 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475459513425 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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