All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

Essay topics:

All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

It is irrefutable to say that ' The car has become an article of dress without which we are uncertain, unclad and incomplete. Every car using non renewable energy should be prohibited and replaced by electronic cars. I agree with this phenomenon and in this essay, i intend to delve the benefits of banning fuel cars and positive impacts of electric cars.

There are many indispensable benefits for banning a car. To begin with, as we are already devoid of fuel on the planet and hence, needs to be preserved for future generations. For instance, if we continue to use these fuel sources than they will no longer be available for upcoming people. In addition, the use of fuel cars is accelerating the air pollution as well as one of the crucial reasons of global warming emissions and toxins in the environment. It has been seen in many research studies that norway has become the first country to propose a ban gasoline cars by switching to an electric-powered vehicle.

On the other hand, electric cars will be a positive development for countries. To begin with, electronic cars resist pollution and ensures safer environment. Moreover, they will not emit any hazardous substance. Second, electricity is relatively cheaper than gasoline and hence, cars are cheaper as well as reliable. maintainance is also less frequent and less expensive. They are very quiet and prevents noise pollution in the city. However, recharging takes a while.

Summing up, both cars have their pros and cons. I believe fuel cars should be banned as they have several deleterious effects on environment and human health.

Governments of many countries are opting electric cars as they are eco-friendly which is a good initiative in order to save the earth.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04137931034 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85193261132 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565517241379 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6411154403 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2222222222 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1111111111 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72222222222 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329219212989 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978031258865 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771641259912 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187812630532 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709797828552 0.056905535591 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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