“Nowadays children are undisciplined because their parents are busy with their career.”
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? agree completely
What could parents do to build a sense of discipline among children? give time, chk company, review from school and teachers, surveillance
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words. feel alone, anger issue, lack of interaction, guidance,
We belong to an era where everything is expensive and to maintain the standard of living, couples have to work together. Some people believe that families, where both parents work, may afford their wants, however, they fall behind in giving time to their babies. As a result of which their children lack basic moral values and discipline. From my perspective, I will support this view and this essay will further discuss the probable solutions to overcome this issue.
Generally, children of working-class parents went through a plethora of things. Firstly and most commonly is loneliness, where children do not have their loved ones around them to talk and this leads to various issues such as anger, anxiety and lack of confidence. Secondly, Lack of interaction from their birth-givers may tend to fall apart them and they find no source of guidance which automatically makes them prone to bad things and indiscipline. Furthermore, some parents handover the responsibility of their young one to others due to lack of time, for example, handover of children to crutches or some close relatives, who sometimes fail to provide proper guidance which results in various behavioral issues. These problems are very critical and a lot of work is required by fosters to overcome these issues.
Undoubtedly, Parents require some critical steps to solve these issues. The prime responsibility of being a parent is to provide sufficient time for their children. Some companies provide a great option of “working from home” to parents so that they can work as well as manage their young ones simultaneously. Secondly, parents should make a regular meet with teachers and school heads of their youngsters to get an update on the behavioral aspects of their children. Thirdly, parents should keep an eye on the company of their children so that they may not fall into the company of bad people. Additionally, dedicating weekends entirely on their child may also prove beneficial in this case. By following these crucial steps parents may able to create a bridge of love with their children and bring discipline in their children’s life.
To encapsulate, it could be summarized by saying that parents are the first teacher of the child and none can deny their valuable role in the upbringing of young ones. Whenever guardians lack behind nurturing their child with love and investing their time, the child may fall in the wrong directions. For the solution of this, foster should adopt many options like working from home, regular checks on a friend circle of their teenagers and spending weekends with their children which will help them in the better upbringing of their child.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 485, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 41.998997996 181% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2419.0 1615.20841683 150% => OK
No of words: 468.0 315.596192385 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1688034188 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6834638017 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487179487179 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 719.1 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3312755234 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.95 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292707495457 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107919894643 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608350140664 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198577332983 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427530838854 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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