Write a minimum of 250 words. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:
The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
Tremendous up-gradation has done in the field of automation from the past few decades. Nowadays people have easy access to the four-wheelers resulting in Jam-packed roads. Some people believe that this inconvenience created by increased usage of cars can be solved by ideas like the promotion of other modes of transports or the implementation of worldwide regulations. This essay will discuss how steps like the positive changes in rules and boosting usage of other vehicles can prove to be beneficial for these crises.
Undoubtedly, In today's world, people consider cars as a necessity more than a luxury. Whether it is traveling longer distances or nearby places, people prefer going into four-wheelers. This has raised a plethora of negative issues. Firstly, Degradation of the air quality in the areas where there is an increased use of automobiles. Air pollution has become a major concern in the current scenario which is increasing day by day by smoke released by cars. Secondly, the Common usage of motor cars created overcrowding of cars on roads which not only causes traffic jam but also noise pollution. Thirdly, the preference for private vehicles in spite of public transports. These are the major concerns related to the rise in the usage of cars and needs improvement.
Furthermore, As a solution to this, some ideas like modification in rules and regulations should be done. For instance, in a few countries there is law-like one person can own one vehicle and odd-even rule of cars where one day all even number cars run on-road and another day odd one. Additionally, charges of tolls should be increased so that people must prefer public transport for longer journeys. In addition to all this, Substitute vehicles like two-wheelers and public transports should be promoted to cope up jam-packed roads. These Options may result in fruitful way.
To recapitulate, It could be said that Although, Cars have provided comfort to mankind but with all these, it has some negative consequences too. Some laws and orders like the restriction of ownership, odd-even rule and rise in toll charges effectively made people opt another option in spite of being dependent on four-wheelers. Moreover, with the promotion of other transport and public vehicles some disadvantages shall be overlapped.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 144, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eling longer distances or nearby places, people prefer going into four-wheelers. ...
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Line 2, column 419, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'day by'.
Suggestion: day by
...he current scenario which is increasing day by day by smoke released by cars. Secondly, the C...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance, in addition, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1938.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20967741935 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95284166601 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551075268817 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3103800515 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11182883188 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349007024562 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261676666812 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717100938003 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257809871792 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.