Nowadays consumer goods have become the most important part of people’s lives. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In this globalised era, without any qualms, it is accepted that consumerism becomes a part-and-parcel of each individual's lives. Whilst, other people argue that there are some downsides of it. Thereby, I agree with the former viewpoint, and in this essay, I will shed some lights on both the merits and demerits by providing cogent arguments and examples.
On the one hand, compelling pieces of evidence prove that the benefits of consumer products are a boon to humanity. Firstly, the primary advantage is it all start from a range of categories: like automobiles, furniture, household products and so on, where these products save a person's time. For instance, all the household chores like washing clothes, cleaning dishes, sweeping and mopping can be done at the click of a button of a washing machine, dishwasher and vacuum cleaner. Consequently, it leaves some room for a person to unwind. Secondly, the hindmost inextricable feature is it makes human's lives easy and more comfortable. Because online e-commerce sites offer a great experience of shopping where a person allowed to shop from their own pace, without driving to brick-and-mortar stores. Hence, these products are highly essential for humans in all aspects.
On the flip side, people across the board discriminates the aforementioned view and claim it has myriads of disadvantages. First, the person becomes materialistic by owning these huge products like a tablet computer, high-end laptop, sports car, and so on. This creates an urge to buy new gadgets and turn them as an impulsive buyer. Moreover, a person may succumb to large financial debts after purchasing products like 3D flat television and smartphones on instalments or credit cards. As a result, a person may lose frugality and the society may become dysfunctional. However, for these products they have a plethora of offers available as well as in affordable range, so its drawbacks can be fixed easily.
In conclusion, though there are some demerits in buying consumer products, its advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Ergo, its contrary can be overlooked or curbed. Consequently, these products save time and offer a convenient and comfortable lifestyle for people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'shopping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: shopping
...ence of shopping where a person allowed to shop from their own pace, without driving to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04371923005 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618233618234 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1235554689 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5263157895 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4736842105 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21052631579 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107616856397 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0319960938825 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420222781531 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727623298485 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394504149387 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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