You are working in a international company. You want to quit your this job. Write a letter to your manager.In your letter, you should say:Why you want to quitWhen you want to leaveWhat you liked about the company.

Essay topics:

You are working in a international company. You want to quit your this job. Write a letter to your manager.

In your letter, you should say:

Why you want to quit

When you want to leave

What you liked about the company.

Dear Mr John,

I am writing to request and inform you about my job resignation, due to my higher education as I have already discussed with you.

To elaborate, you have been a great mentor to share all my interests and ideas. I have applied for a scholarship to do higher education in Human Resource Management in Sydney, Australia. Luckily, I have my seat confirmed, so, unfortunately, I need to leave this organisation.

As the course starts by December third week, I must be there within a fortnight. This would be helpful for me to settle down with good accommodation near to the college. Consequently, I have to get relieved by November last week.

Furthermore, it is really hard to be away from such a great conglomerate, where I have learned all new technologies and strategies to handle complex issues. Moreover, it is a place where the convenience of the employee has revered a lot which I got admired.

I would like to request you for the confirmation of the last date of my working as soon as possible. Thank you for being considerate.

Yours Faithfully,

Ms.Valli

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 27, column 4, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Valli
...onsiderate. Yours Faithfully, Ms.Valli
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, moreover, really, so, third

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92513368984 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10595306412 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1401250521 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.75 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5833333333 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184400539047 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680058651622 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799386059079 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106618401768 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100150000675 0.0580467560999 173% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.