Nowadays the increased amount of garbage is a real concern. Why this is happening. what can be done to resolve it?
Concept of garbage is as old as the human history, but recently, as the population is skyrocketing, it has become a new phenomenon of a real concern. However, if we pinpoint the real cause, we can solve this issue in no time.
There are a number of factors which are responsible for this condition. Firstly, in some areas the sewage system is still not underground. These were built approximately hundred years ago and they are not capable to handle dump of recent population and usually overflow in the rainy season and the liter is all over the roads and grounds. Secondly, technology has helped humans in enormous ways, but you cannot ignore it’s drawbacks. Things made of synthetic material-polythene bags, Plastic bottles, Tins, cans, Boxes- do not usually disintegrate into the environment and can be hugely dangerous for marine creatures and also results in high amounts of filth on the earth. Thirdly, Council does not pick up the garbage in regular basis and in some areas, even the service is not provided. Finally, some people habitually through discarded stuff on roads and outside houses, even if there are government provided garbage bins installed in each road.
As we know the problem, we can easily take steps to solve each one of them. Firstly, it is the government’s responsibilities to update the infrastructures according to latest demand of the society. Secondly, there should be a ban on the products made of the synthetic material. For instance, recently CDA- ISLAMABAD- has put a ban on plastic bag, which will hopefully prove to be a major step towards a clean environment. Thirdly, local councils should regulate the garbage picking department and strict policies and procedures should be implemented to pick litter and other garbage from house to house on a regular basis, and they should also extend this service to other areas. Finally, there should be a huge campaign to increase awareness among masses to keep their area clean, which will consequently result in increased health and reduced diseases.
In conclusion, It is the responsibility of both the government and the people to work together to solve this issue. But prevention is better than cure, so I think the ban on such products will help incredibly in the long run.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...rground. These were built approximately hundred years ago and they are not capable to h...
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Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the latest'.
Suggestion: to the latest
...to update the infrastructures according to latest demand of the society. Secondly, there ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, third, thirdly, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05039787798 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91294271211 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575596816976 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4018576837 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1764705882 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.82352941176 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177321545072 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470239883806 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410189037472 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103200472688 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554124962878 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.