Nowadays many individuals spend more time out of their hometown. Why is it happening? What is the impact of this on a person and their family?
Nowadays, double income families have become a norm in society and consequently individuals spend less time with their family. One of the main reasons for this trend is that the world turns to a small village in which people have to communicate more than they did in the past and the expansion of business globally affected humans significantly. This had great influence on families such as lack of intimacy and supervision.
There are a variety of reasons for people’s travelling across the globe and spending less time in their hometown. Firstly, business has become an international trade and in many developed countries affluent people and politicians invest money in developing countries by running factories that produce commodities that are cheaper for the consumers as a result of cheap labor. Secondly, many young people are interested in developing their education and skills in prestigious universities overseas. Meanwhile, a majority of professional tutors have to travel to these universities to hold the classes. Finally,
This issue would influence families in various ways. It is argued that parents are less involved in children’s upbringing and they are not aware of how their young children spend their time. Consequently, many adolescents become delinquent due to the lack of family supervision and the peer pressure. Furthermore, many people who spend the majority of their time far from home feel homesick which will lead to depression in the future. To support my claim, I can refer to an article having been published in Times magazine, indicates that in the USA almost 30% of the overseas students feel isolated and depressed as a result of loneliness.
In conclusion, although in this technologically advanced world parents have to work hard in order to cover the life costs and make a comfortable life for their families, they should take the advantages of technology and reduce the number of their missions to other nations by making video conferences or meetings. I believe that the family values should be concerned as the most important parts of people’s lives.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28783382789 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00175906069 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581602373887 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.5388967648 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.285714286 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280582541005 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957357429988 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663648809984 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164452546006 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504949465596 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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