Nowadays many people are diagnosed with anorexia. What are the causes of this? What can be done to improve the situation?

Essay topics: Nowadays many people are diagnosed with anorexia. What are the causes of this? What can be done to improve the situation?

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Nowadays, there are enormous number of people are exposed to anorexia. Here I will explain in details what are the causes and how and providing some suggestions to reduce from it as following,
So there are number of people are diagnosed with anorexia disease. Reasons could result from aspects. Firstly, cigarette's smokers suffer from this effect. When they smoke more, their inclination to food become less, as a result, they will become slimmer due to having cigarettes, so it could be a reason increase from the percentage of acidity in the stomach, which it will lead to anorexia. Secondly, having caffeine drinks on empty stomach will affect unfoubtedly. Lastly, eating oily foods will also present another problem to stomach as well. For example, there is doctor specialised in internal medicine said that " most of people who are diagnosed with anorexia effect, they smoke too much, in consequence, it will lead to block their inclination to food due to acidity increased in the stomach."
Furthermore, this phenomenon is not a permanent issue, as it could be treated by taking some medicine, as it can be prescribed by doctors to patients and following a few structures to eradicate it easily. So patients should pursue the given prescription which it was given by the concerned doctor, in this case, patients will be able to reduce from anorexia. Another solution could be suggested, eating vegetables and fruits could decrease from anorexia, it can turn the stomach to work into normal condition.
In brief, individuals who suffer from anorexia must control themselves by avoiding bad habits. Anorexia is very dangerous phenomenon, as it will be a reason for losing weight, in turn i will weaken the system immune in the human's body. Consequently, numeric diseases may encounter them.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in brief, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15986394558 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77612913267 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561224489796 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 112.395908452 49.4020404114 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 116.692307692 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199124375623 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663723343215 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681413492609 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121036472079 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391044160723 0.056905535591 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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