Nowadays many people are diagnosed with anorexia. What are the causes of this? What can be done to improve the situation?

Anorexia is a mental illness, in which person becomes over-conscious about weight loss and their appetite is reduced. Whereas, this issue is rapidly spreading these days and more and more people are diagnosed with it. Here, I shall scrutinise the reason behind this problem and solution to improve the situation.

Admittedly, there are numerous causes for anorexia to occur. First of all, contemporary life style and society, in which over-weighted people are looked down upon. They are considered ugly and are teased with different names, which consequently make them desperate to lose weight and their eating habits are reduced. For instance, according to recent research this problem was most common in students, who were regularly taunted at school or home. Therefore, this is primary reason for anorexia. Moreover, people like to follow slim fashion models, thus to look like them, they follow any possible way. Hence, modern community's irrational thinking about fat people and their craze to be fit is accountable for it.

However, solution to this issue can be simply by making guardians aware about anorexia and its hazardous repercussion, through media and with help of schools. Also, one should not be taunted for being obese, and schools should teach learners the value of balanced diet to their body. To illustrate, in India various public schools have started programmes to educate parents and children about health issues related to diet. Furthermore, advertisement promoting wieght loss tablets and other products should be banned, and only doctors should be given right to prescribe them to public. Deducing, this serious issue can be solved by encouraging individuals, not to discriminate people on basis of body weight and with assistance of government.

In conclusion, aneroxia as aforementioned is basically due to present life style and thinking, which can only be changed by collective efforts of authorities and people.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76531673036 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629508196721 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5465605198 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.9375 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1875 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225903597836 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739958718443 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505379086549 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127178270432 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413621401635 0.056905535591 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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