Nowadays, many people have to work longer time, and they feel more stressful than before. What are the reasons? What can employers do to make their life easier?
In today's word, the increasing of working hours has become a widespread phenomenan which sequanced in making people more stressed than before. this essay will discuss both the causes and the potential solutions that employers can provide to overcome the problem.
The main reason for why people work longer hours than before is their need to increase their income. The longer they work, the more saliries they earn. Therefore, achieving better living conditions, which are more complex and materialistic than before, for them selves and for their families. To solve such problem employers can provide some facilities, other than commisions or bonuses, that can enhances living conditions; for instance, covering school's expenses for the employee's children, or providing medical-insurance for both the employee and his dependents.
The reason for the increasing levels of stress among those long-time workers is the lack of work/life balance. To explain, when people spend most of their day-time in work, for five or six days per week, they could not have enough time for their social life or personal care, leading them to be stressed. For example, a full-time working parent, will probably have no time neither physical or mental power to accomplish his parenting duties. To overcome this matter, companies can arrange trips and organise parties for the employees with their families. Another solution is to subsidies meditation sessions, and to offer gym memberships for the workers as sports and meditation help reducing stress.
In conclusion, because of today's financial pressures, employees work more hours than before. And as a result of this imbalanced lifestyle, workers often get stressed. Nevertheless, offering facilities and subsidizes, by the employers, can be possible remedies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54151624549 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7762037996 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602888086643 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5852563336 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.642857143 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303264903664 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111621055762 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730121681356 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181927415514 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445803012481 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.