Nowadays many people want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In this modern time, the majority of people tend to purchase lavish commodities such as clothes, cars and other accessories. There could be various elements driving this trend but the major ones are international marketing, status symbol and improved standard of living. In my opinion, this is a negative phenomenon and has adverse ramifications on domestic trade.
As far as the cause behind the increased tendency of purchasing expensive products is concerned, international brands are flooding the local markets. This is due to the availability and accessibility of platforms such as the internet and television adverts to promote these products on a global scale. As a result, people are now more familiar with the popular manufacturing companies and want to buy products from them. For instance, Apple advertises its phones and tablets at a large scale and attracts customers across the globe. Another reason for this growing trend is the sense of materialism. Modern society gives more importance to fancy items and judges each other on the basis of possessing designer clothes and luxurious cars. Therefore, in order to maintain this social image, people buy more such items. The final element driving this change in the shopping tendency is the improved quality of life. People are nowadays wealthier as compared to the past and spend money on splendid accessories.
Although this behaviour is quite prevalent among people, it has adverse implications on the local economy. It is because most of the popular brands are international manufacturers and with the increased sale of such products, the regional retailers suffer. For example, the annual sale of Maruti cars has been decreased significantly since 2018 when its global competitors BMW, Audi and Ford entered the Indian automobile industry. Therefore, by considering the effect of consumerism of such products, it is certainly a negative development.
In conclusion, global advertising, tendency to show off and better lifestyle changes are some of the factors which boost the sale of prominent brands and attract customers, who purchase such products. By considering the effect of this consumerism on the local market, I would describe it as a negative movement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1897.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40455840456 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96190809625 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3063316562 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.388888889 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61111111111 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2189193847 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642118649197 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459416768045 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119211307912 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051929654064 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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