Nowadays many people want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Indubitably, a plethora number of people today are extremely serious about their fame and living standard, so that they tend to buy popular and expensive products such as clothes, cars, and other necessary items. This phenomenon is offering numerous benefits for both society and people, however, there are some drawbacks with this ongoing trend. In this essay, I will shed light on the reasons for this trend along with both sides of development.
On the brighter side, firstly, to give more effort on brands product by population we circulate more money. As a result, the money will use to build national growth rapidly. To exemplify, a recent survey conducted in India represents that 1.5 percent of gross domestic product arises due to famous brand companies such as Nike, Addidas, Louis Phillipe, Gucci, and many more. In addition, due to the high quality of items, national reputation in the world ranking is increased. Consequently, foreigners can visit our nation and buy these products during their journey. Apart from this, famous auto industries like BMW, Audi, Ford, and Ferrari will install their new plant in our country due to the high selling rate of these products. These new automobile plants can help to increase the economy of the country.
On the negative side, there are some consequences with this kind of trend. At first, poor and middle-class people also want to use branded things to follow their inspiration and famous personalities such as movie stars, famous sportsmen, or rich person. Thus, they will take a private loan from the bank to fulfill their dreams and desires. Unfortunately, a certain number of times, these middle-class men or poor citizens of a nation could not pay their bank loan, so, they sell their assets which are given to the bank as financial security before the bank grants them a loan. Moreover, the local market gains more losses due to high-branded companies and malls.
To conclude, I personally think that there are both pros and cons of the current trend in the latest lifestyle of individuals who seeks to buy expensive items to showcase their personalities to the general public. However, the decision should be made wisely because there could be downsides in terms of financial security if branded and costly items have been bought without a wise decision.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'brands'' or 'brand's'?
Suggestion: brands'; brand's
...r side, firstly, to give more effort on brands product by population we circulate more...
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Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... to showcase their personalities to the general public. However, the decision should be made w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, thus, apart from, in addition, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1952.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08333333333 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59287133712 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598958333333 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.020510332 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.823529412 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5882352941 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168575340394 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486164389043 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408597112491 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972051140362 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312094041336 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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