Nowadays many people work part or full time from home. Some people say that
working from home has many benefits while others disagree. Discuss both views
and give your own opinion.
Technology has revolutionized the way human beings go about their daily life. These days, there are a lot of people who do their work from home; either it is a part-time or a full-time job. Whilst some people are of the belief that doing tasks with this has many benefits, others have a diverse view. I'm convinced that it has a plethora of economic pitfalls on the society. Both points of view will be illustrated below.
On the one hand, working beside your dependents away from the workplace is a trend nowadays for many reasons. To put it another way, not only can it relieve the stress and strengthen the family bond, but also does it save money for the employers because they will not pay the offices’ rent. For example, in the UK, some international companies hire professionals to work remotely and that decreases traffic congestion and has a financial impact on the economy. Thus, this example shows that home-sourced employment is crucial and high authorities should take care of it.
On the other hand, professionals working from home complain of isolation and loneliness from their bosses and coworkers and this can be very depressing to some. In other words, workers need to communicate with their colleagues and have meetings with managers from time to another. Moreover, some resources need a team leader’s supervision for creativity and productivity. For instance, a research paper published by BBC sheds light upon the importance of cooperation between juniors and seniors and the profound effect on innovation. Consequently, if the companies seek high revenue, they should communicate better with their representatives.
In conclusion, although working from home has a gigantic effect on health and family, it has demerits on the economy. I believe that onsite staff is more effective and prolific than the remote workforce.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14900662252 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90570224998 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619205298013 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4009250398 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1875 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315769963204 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887794469741 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0996751278648 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177679779738 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690058617773 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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