You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter •
describe the item.
• Explain where and when you left it
• say what action you would like the company to take Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
April 4, 2020
Dear Sir or Madam,
This is Karim Farhan, one of your regular customers. I am writing to you to help me in an urgent case. I lost a valuable item in yesterday noon journey from Cairo to Alexandria.
Firstly, I took the train from Cairo railway station yesterday at 1 PM, and according to the ticket, the train number was A123900, and the seat number was 0098, the VIP section. Although I was working on my Apple laptop the whole journey, I forgot to put it in my case after sending some important emails to my clients.
Secondly, I want your company laborers on this train to do whatever they can to find it because I will lose a lot of contracts if I did not get this laptop. Additionally, I would like to compensate anyone who can help me to get it back. Hope you understand my situation, and I promise you that I will take care of my personal gadgets next time.
Finally, I am looking forward to hearing from you soon, and I would appreciate your immediate attention to this matter.
Faithfully,
Karim Farhan
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 54, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'doing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: doing
...ant your company laborers on this train to do whatever they can to find it because I ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52105263158 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56952629369 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642105263158 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3294606189 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205747589029 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739521287397 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675445111398 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124116513232 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587538451197 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.