Nowadays, more and more movies and music are available on internet at free of cost.
Is this positive or negitive development?
Give the valid reasons.
The entertainment is more important in very ones life. Nowadays, movies and music are most popular entertainment zones. In 1990s, people used to spend a lot of money to access the cinema and music. However, these are very cheap when internet come into the picture. It has more advantages than disadvantages. We discuss a few in this essay.
Firstly, the entertainment is available to all people if it is free on internet. In other words, people could watch movies and listen to music all over the world. As a result, they get to know about other nation culture and languages. For example, so many people watch English movies to learn English language with subtitles and music also playing key role to improve the listing skills in other languages. Moreover, some institutions and universities are suggesting to their students to watch other language films and listen to different cultures of music to improve the skills.
Secondly, people who live in remote and county areas can’t access the theaters and music shops, as well as they can’t afford money to spend on it. But, internet is exists everywhere in current days at low cost. If the films and music available on internet, that would be very helpful to those people. For example, every body is accessing free videos and albums in YouTube website and most of movies and music are free in this site. Because of this reason, most of people get entertainment and have fun.
To sum up, the free films and albums are very useful to people, however, there is a chance to addict to internet. So, take precautions to avoid addiction such as put limitations on internet access. therefore, it has lot of pros when compare to cons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the movies') or simply say ''most movies''.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87197231834 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60821167969 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539792387543 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7160289548 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1052631579 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2105263158 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47368421053 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246689875651 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750209963326 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521997363459 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140977666553 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605633056401 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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