Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrant should abandon their old ways and adapt to local custom and codes of behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?
In the recent times, the rate at which people migrate to foreign countries is increasing. It is believed that for new immigrant to survive in his host countries, he needs to completely embrace the custom and lifestyles of the people in the countries . I believe that the new immigrant should completely substitute his traditions and values with the customs and codes of behaviour of the host country in order to eliminate culture shock and avoid hurting the sentiments of the nationals.
There is no doubt that new immigrant will experience culture shock in another country as they will be exposed to customs, traditions, values and lifestyle that are entirely different from theirs. For quick adaptation to the new system, it is advisable to absolutely adopt the new ways of life in their host country. For example, the survey conducted by the Department of Demography and Social Statistics, University of Stockholm shows that 25% of the foreign students failed to complete their programs due to inability to adapt to the Scandinavian societal norms and lifestyle.
Understanding the host country's cultural , social and legal environment is important for the immigrant's survival . To avoid hurting the sentiments of the aborigines of the country, adopting the lifestyles and codes of conduct of the land is sacrosanct. For example, according to statistics from the Nigeria Immigration , over 50% of the Nigerians that traveled to United Arab Emirates in the last decade were repatriated for drinking in the public , a behaviour that the local people found repulsive.
In conclusion, to adapt in a foreign nation as an immigrant, it is necessary to totally embrace the acceptable norms and ethics of the land in order not to hurt the feeling of the citizens and to eliminate the culture shock that could be experienced .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16891891892 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92730963588 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516891891892 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.5145511241 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.0 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210856368068 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871717834724 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390937689719 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119705384887 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599367458356 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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