nowadays the most important task is the environmental protection of our planet for the future generations. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Exquisitely adorned earth is becoming increasingly defiled with the human’s imprudent actions. So, it is essential to take steps to procure the natural equilibrium of our earth. It is the responsibility of the humans to hinder the exasperating activities and to prevent the impending and tremendous aftermaths.
One important reason for taking preventive measures to reduce the dangers is that the humans are the culprits for the defiled environment hitherto. In other words, only established two-legged animals can save our natural habitat from the destruction. For instance, a recent survey published that our one-third of the pure water supply is polluted with plastics and industrial wastes. So, these actions can only be revoked by them.
Another one important reason is, it would not be possible for our species to thrive in this world if the pollution rate is continuing the same. For example, the hot and hard topic of today’s world is global warming caused by human’s imprudent actions, which possibly make this globe as an uninhabitable one in the coming future. By considering these facts, government and responsible organizations should act swiftly to replace the matted rules with predominant and strong enactments.
Finally, it is a common nature and responsibility of the living beings to save something for their offspring. Saving the clean and beautiful environment is worthwhile rather than saving any amount of wealth one could save for their children. More importantly, clean air and water are essential for the human-like species to sustain in this earthly environment.
In conclusion, the humans created menaces should be resolved by humans itself and that should be our foremost task.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, third, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42007434944 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02653375655 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587360594796 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9730535476 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.142857143 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142918285599 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497252972446 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356717025613 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0767594401811 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267686197942 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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