Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening?
What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
With the rise in hefty population, the wastes created by human are also contribute to the significantly huge proportions. Many factors stand as a reason behind this issue. In this essay I intend to discuss about some causative reasons and the initiatives which are supposed to be taken by the government to mitigate the situation.
First of all, we are all dependent on plastics which are the main culprits behind the wastes. Recently I have came across a programme in National versioning channel demonstrating the ill effects of plastic usage. Secondly, we human throw out things which can be even reused or given to some other people. Finally, with the invent of various technological aspects ,it also leaves the earth with huge amount of unwanted substances.
Unless, the government frame new rules and regulations the situation cannot be curbed. It should intrigue the citizens by some forms of remunerations. The factories letting out the wastes without treatment shall be fined or the cancellation of license. Civilians also should take their active role and for instance, several campaigns are conducted by NGO's for educating the citizens in minimising the waste products.
In future years government shall put forth steps which shall ensure the recycling process. Recently, some countries have adopted plastic roads and plastic buildings which are derived from the plastic wastes. The alternative usage of plastics should be invented too.
To conclude, it is the joint role of both the government and citizens to alleviate this scenario, in bringing up the clean and safe planet which would facilitate our younger generation for their living.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'contributed'.
Suggestion: contributed
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Message: Use past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
...rits behind the wastes. Recently I have came across a programme in National versioni...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ven to some other people. Finally, with the invent of various technological aspects ,it al...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29924242424 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77158601699 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3471601644 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0723403840579 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0233621328623 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0213075157314 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0415011229744 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149640207265 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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