Nowadays, people are spending more time away from their homes because they spend longer hours in their workplace. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.
It has been seen that people become more workaholic and prefer to spend longer hours on office rather than home. It is mainly due to incline in competition and desire to uplift their standard of living. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of overtime on individuals and their family with feasible conclusion.
To begin with, in the present scenario the competition among youngsters to achieve success in their life is at high rate. Everyone is in the race of getting life better than others. Therefore, working for longer hours provide means to have all comfort of life’s by earning extra money. Furthermore, when an employee work with energy and motivated towards his work even if he work till late night then it not only enhance his productivity and chances of promotions but also raises the profits of company. Hence, it is a win-win situation for employee as well as employer. For example it is published in the article of Tribune newspaper that percentage of overtime workers are inclined to it’s four fold as compare to the past.
However, it’s impacts on the relationship can not be denied. When people spend most of their time on workplace then they hardly get time for their family which further give birth to issues such as lack of bonding, disputes etc. Thus, it reduces their productivity at work place and work it as an obligation instead with interest. Besides this, people have hectic schedule and do work in same position for long time then it also affects their health and leads to medical problems like obesity, heart attack, blood pressure problems, etc. It impairs their quality of life and reduces life expectancy.
In conclusion, no doubt overtime give chance to earn more money and experience but people should consider that overload doesn’t give good impact to their personal commitments. It is suggested that individuals must know how to keep balance between professional and personal commitments.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05882352941 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59131832318 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609907120743 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2392120164 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.125 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248900326275 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711203374022 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819308066464 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152716897039 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0958433914841 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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