Nowadays people have free access to music and films online. Is this a positive or a negative development?
Provide relevant examples from you own experience.
The internet and technology have not left a single aspect of our life untouched, especially the way we access music and films, which are now available to watch and listen from anywhere. In my opinion, if we examine its impact on individual and on society as a whole, it is a mixed blessing, whose effectiveness lies only in the way users used it.
To begin with, the interne has changed the face of entertainment industry by its recent advancements. When TV used to be a only source of relaxation, people not only have to spend a lot of money but also were bounded to sit in front of it. On the other hand, online content comes at very affordable price and excellent quality, and provide platform to for new artists to show their potential, which was extremely difficult in the past and has revolutionized the whole market. For example, YouTuber all over the world are getting popular as result of diverse online market. Thus, viewer and the artists both are benefitted by the online films and music.
However, it is not as lucrative as it sounds because it has some serious implication on our daily lives. Due to reduction in price, people started spending a lot of their time in watching movies, which has impacted their productivity and made them lethargic. For example, on an average, people spend at least 2 hours on their devices to watch music and movie videos. In addition, it is impossible to prevent piracy on the internet, which has become a nightmare for the producers who have invested their fortune in the production of those films. Thus, the popularity on online movies is dangerous for individual as well as society.
In conclusion, online multimedia market has both upside and downside but it is up to people to what extent they should exploit it. It is time to come up with better strategy to regulate its legal and illegal usage for the betterment of the community.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, well, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73939393939 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67360667179 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572727272727 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6961260968 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.714285714 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0893009124557 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.030381577894 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349534872915 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.052020066147 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204166432844 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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