The ways of food consumption of the human have undergone significant change in the past couple of decades. We have surpassed the traditional cooking methods, which undertook the importance of foods' nutritional value, and we have adjusted to a lifestyle depending on processed foods that are readily available to us. Even though they are some advantages, I firmly believe that the disadvantage far outweighs them. In this essay, I will discuss the reasoning for my perspective and provide relevant justifications.
The commonly discussed advantages regarding fast food are fast and easy access and the growth of the economy. With our increasingly busy lifestyles, it is a challenge to reserve time to prepare meals each day. Therefore, people tend to choose a simple and calory-dense meal, such as a cheeseburger, to provide them with sufficient energy to complete their daily routines. Food purchased from fast-food chains typically tends to be of better taste, further encouraging individuals to buy more junk food. Another advantage of increased access to fast food is the rise in employment opportunities. As more and more shops open that sell instant food, this creates contingencies for chefs.
However, despite the convenience of fast food over home-cooked meals, there are many disadvantages to the physical and mental aspects of one's health. Junk food has a high proportion of unhealthy fats and various chemical preservatives and flavorings, which can be extremely harmful to the body. When consumed in large proportions over time, an individual's risk of developing chronic conditions such as obesity, diabetes, cancer, and high blood pressure. These illnesses can significantly impact one's health, hindering them from their ability to complete day-to-day activities. Mental health can also be affected by excessive consumption of junk food. Numerous researches reflect that eating fast food can help develop insomnia, depression, self-doubt, and social anxiety.
The diet of the human has undergone several changes throughout the years after the introduction of fast food. Even though it is very convenient to consume these foods, there are significant disadvantages associated with them. Therefore, I strongly believe that the penalties overshadow the stated pros.
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also, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1889.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42816091954 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97743722825 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591954022989 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 348.0 20.2975951904 1714% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1889.0 106.682146367 1771% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 348.0 20.7667163134 1676% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 52.0 7.06120827912 736% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29354310205 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.29354310205 0.084324248473 348% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167022054236 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610871226888 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 178.1 13.0946893788 1360% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -290.2 50.2224549098 -578% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 140.2 11.3001002004 1241% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.69 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 26.07 8.58950901804 304% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 62.0 9.78957915832 633% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 141.2 10.1190380762 1395% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 62.0 10.7795591182 575% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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