Nowadays, people living in large cities face many problems in their dayly lives. What are these problems? Do you think that
the government should encourage people to move in smaller towns?
Human life is becoming increasingly tiresome and stressful in today's competitive environment. There are many people who are of the opinion that individuals living in urban cities have to deal with many issues as compared to those who live in smaller towns. This essay will discuss two such common problems while agreeing with the suggestion that government must come forward and inspire people to move to smaller towns for a better and enriching life.
The first major concern faced by many in large cities is the constant competetion people are subject to. Everyone strives to out-perform others, be it in work or personal life. For instance, everyone wants a highly paid job, a huge apartment or a big car. Instead of being content in nurturing relationships and quality life, people are moving towards achieving material success. This is creating undue pressure and stress as they lack satisfaction in their present and always look at a better future.
Secondly, due to hectic lifestyle, fast life has given rise to speedy solutions for everything, including food. Fast food and junk food has become staple for many, as they no longer have time to cook a decent meal. For example, processed food is now made available in tins and plastic boxes, which are heated in the microwave and consumed directly. These containers are made from bad quality plastics and eventually affect its users in the long run. Greasy and unhealthy food has become a norm in every household affecting the future generations as well.
Since these issues are affecting the country's population and their standard of living, the law-makers must come forward and come up with options to relocate people to smaller towns by offering them a peaceful life. Farmlands can be made available as vacation destinations so that people can come and experience a lifestyle free from stress and junk. This is will create awareness of what they are missing in life and make them take a decision for themselves and their families.
To conclude, the essay discussed in detail the concerns faced by today's urban population including hectic lifestyle and unhealthy food consumption and offered solutions which government can offer to help their citizens make a better choice in life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10298102981 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62399204903 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566395663957 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7850122394 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.764705882 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7058823529 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199793124247 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567554296937 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686106997475 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109598476729 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075650874439 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.