Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
The topic of who should take the onus of ensuring that children are fed healthy food at all times is a controversial one. So, who is ultimately responsible to supervise a child's diet? While there are some who believe that the accountability must be jointly owned by both the educational institutions and the parents, others do not agree with this statement. In my opinion, both the school and parents must own-it up and come together to safeguard the child's well-being by managing their daily food intake.
Firstly, it is an accepted fact that all good habits begin at home. Therefore, parents play a vital role in influencing their child's nutritional preference by what they themselves consume at home. Health conscious parents tend to ensure that their children's diet is balanced in order to boost their overall growth and immunity. For instance, family with both parents often working late, usually binge on junk or fast food and end-up feeding their children the same kind of food. Since, a major portion of a child's formative years are spent at home with parents, they form lasting dietary habits which either benefit them or become a lifestyle hazard in the future.
Similarly, schools' are also places where the child spends a good part of their day learning new concepts which broaden their minds. In addition to parents, teachers' also play a crucial part in educating children about ill-effects of consuming unhealthy food. To illustrate, fun sessions or workshops can be arranged and visual documentaries can be shown to emphasize on the significance of good diet as against the detrimental effects of choosing a harmful diet. Hence, educational institutions can promote health campaigns with support and participation of local parents, to introduce and inspire children to choose a better life by taking informed decisions as far as food is concerned.
To sum up, this essay is completely in agreement that both parents and schools must step forward and educate and supervise the dietary habits of their children. This can be done by making sure that their eating habits at home are well-organized and monitored by parents', while schools' ensure that proper awareness of unbalanced and harmful diet is given to reduce the chances of adopting an unsafe lifestyle.
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Suggestion:
...ecome a lifestyle hazard in the future. Similarly, schools are also places where...
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also, first, firstly, hence, if, similarly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, kind of, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12064343164 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74785980209 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56836461126 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7841563374 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.333333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8666666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199602206095 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670347857907 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515689688912 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125840002228 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447469964959 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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