On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of the lost item.Write a letter to the insurance manager.In your letter:describe the item you lostexplain how you lost ittell the insurance company what

Essay topics:

On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of the lost item.

Write a letter to the insurance manager.
In your letter:

describe the item you lost
explain how you lost it
tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend no more than 20 minutes on this task

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to lodge an insurance claim for an item I recently lost while on holiday in Cyprus.

The lost item is a pair of Ray Ban sunglasses. They were a limited edition with gold and leather detailing, and are valued at 300 pounds. I have enclosed the receipt and a photograph of the glasses for your reference. They are not only financially valuable, but they are also quite special to me as they were given to me by my fiance. The glasses fell off my head and into the sea while dolphin watching on a boat cruise.

I took out travel insurance on the 18th of February, just prior to my trip. I kindly request that your company reimburse me for the value of my glasses as part of my travel insurance so that I can replace the pair that I lost. My insurance number is 555 77 88.

Thank you for your assistance. I look forward to your reply.

Yours faithfully,
Caterina Cortes

Votes
Average: 7 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 747.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44642857143 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4994259545 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3741630383 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.25 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232532376487 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808309882893 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702188640781 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143818332375 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530947765521 0.0580467560999 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.