Should parents be obliged to immunise their children against common childhood diseases? Or do individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?
What is your view of this practice?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
The topic of immunisation is a controversial one. While there are some who believe that forced vaccination must be adopted, others argue that it must be a matter of personal choice. In my view, while a wide-berth can be given to parents for certain vaccinations, other diseases which spread easily and infect other children must be imposed as a mandate.
Parents today are moving towards providing natural therapy to their kids and therefore, do not prefer resorting to usage of drugs for their children. Their concentration is more on strengthening body's immunity and enabling it to fight virus by itself without any external support. For instance, a eye-opening article in the Health and Heart magazine's October 2017 edition, published experiments conducted by naturo-therapists where chronic ailments like Asthma and Sinus were cured by following an organic regime. Since there are no side-effects, parents must be given the right to choose.
Despite the proven benefits of natural therapy, there have been instances where certain common virus infections have spread among children like fire. Since every child's body immunity is different, these infections hamper their growth and development. To illustrate, inspite of making ROTA vaccination available at all public and private hospitals due to some parents' decision against vaccinating their children lead to their children falling prey to this virus more than once, weakening their immunity. Government must therefore step-up and take charge as this is the need of the hour.
To conclude, parents must definitely be given the authority to decide how and what to immunise their child against. However, it is also an accepted fact that some parents might be ignorant of the full extent of harm certain diseases might cause. Therefore, in my view government should intervene make these vaccinations an imposition on all parents.
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Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39864864865 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84596647923 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618243243243 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1445533093 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.142857143 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292156332758 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919583618094 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617762526031 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167347005801 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226227762026 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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