In many cities today, most people live in large apartment blocks. Does this kind of accommodation have more advantages or disadvantages?
People across the globe spend a lot of time and money while choosing a house for themselves. There has been a drastic increase in the number of people opting to occupy flats in huge buildings in major cities. This essay will discuss in detail how the benefits of living in apartments surpasses its drawbacks.
To start with, one of the biggest drawbacks which discourages people from opting to stay in flats is the space-constraint. Since the area is predefined and fixed in the blueprint, making additions or extensions at a later stage is not possible. For instance, once the apartment plan is decided, the buyer is allotted a fixed space with a binding clause that restricts them from encroaching the common area. This obviously restricts the buyers, especially once their circumstances change including marriage or children. It is therefore not a preferred choice for some to move into an apartment house and so they prefer living in individual houses.
Having said that, the numerous benefits the flats offer, makes them a preferable choice for many. The foremost advantage is the safety it guarantees. People from different walks of life occupy these apartments and therefore, security of paramount importance. For instance, installing up-to-date security cameras in common areas and placing guards at various entrance points, becomes a necessity, to avoid entry on unsavory characters into the building. This promotes the feeling of safety among its residents.
Another positive aspect is the opportunity it presents to make friends and extending the social circle. Today's hectic work life does not provide time to individuals to make new friends. This is taken care when people living in the same apartment who share the common tastes and preferences, come together and socialize. Since, they live nearby, time is not lost in elaborate planning and travelling. For instance, young mothers often look at other mothers who have children in the same age-group, for support and guidance. This strengthens their bond, builds trust and mutual respect over time. Since people meet almost everyday, they are able to catch-up on each other more than those who opt to stay in individual houses.
To conclude, the essay highlights the benefits of living in an apartment which includes the safety & security of its residents and the opportunity to develop ever-lasting friendships, inspite of having concerns with living in a constrained space. The increasing number of people moving into flats clearly points towards the changing preferences of today's city crowds.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2164.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29095354523 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77996999885 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572127139364 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3397318433 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3636363636 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5909090909 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.95454545455 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197775425984 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537751435014 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373154248728 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112654960978 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333248544802 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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